Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) Jizzle 2008-06-03 12:02:39 PM
What's with the massive continuity error? Last chapter, it wasn't winter break yet. Now it's the summer? This makes no sense, especially since it was made clear that Tony and the rest of Harry's family were not going to stand not seeing Harry over Christmas break. (At least, I got that impression.) So seriously, what the hell?
Author's response
- Chapter 7 went from just before christmas break to April 1st when Dumbles confiscated Harry's Tech Suit. (I wrote a christmas break chapter through 4 different drafts before saying to hell with it and just skipping the holiday) The 'hearing' before the Wizengamot and Thor's little cameo was May 12th.
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