I love this story, its amusing and interesting. Although i can understand leaving out chunks of their Bella and Harry's past, it would have been to hard to construct, it would have been nice to have a little bit more than the juicy tidbits you dropped. I like you chapter overall. Interested to see what you are going to do with Snape though. Its also good to see a possible serious relationship with another Gryph girl especially one of the older or equal age ones. Good Job!