Review for Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

(#) Aerie22 2008-06-12

At last! A harem smut fic where Harry actually seems to like his women. Too many of the ones I've read seem either to have Harry, who has barely ever been kissed before, starting to slap his closest lady friends around and calling them sluts, or having innocent young girls suddenly become subservient, mindless sex bots. I like that your Harry cares for the girls and they seem to care about him, without all the typical conventions of porn fiction developed by sweaty virgin teenaged boys. I hope you continue in this mode and not fall back on the SM/BD male domination stuff. Sex is so much better, and sexier, when you care about your partner.
Aerie22

Author's response

Thanks, I'm glad you like what I'm doing with the story. A key component in the bond that will be developing is an emotional connection between Harry and his ladies, and between the ladies themselves.

Each of the girls will, to the best of my ability, each have a distinctive personality, and, while I can't promise there will be no BD/SM showing up in the story, it will strictly be in a role-playing encounter. Harry won't start whipping the girls and make them wear leather collars. They are his lovers/wives, not his slaves.

I'll be posting more chapters tonight. I'm working on Chapter Nine right now.

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