Review for Things Not Spoken
Kudos for a sense of urgency and never letting us forget why these two are part of that awesome elite group known as the Turks.
Two things, tho' (and I'm being picky, so don't feel bad about it):
1) I'm not quite happy with how Tseng reacts to Vincent. Well, more that thing about he being repulsed by "what he is"... or something (sorry, kinda bad at quoting things). But, hey, I'm biased: I love Vince.
2) That last thing Vince said about contacting the company and arranging for a car... unless one of them had managed to keep a their phone, I'm not quite sure how Vincent went about that. Then again, they did appear rather randomly back at Edge, so -shrugs-
Anyway, that's my two cents. Like I said, I really like this. Good job!
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