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Your story has made it in to the library of the forum. We are a site that critiques Naruto fanfiction. We intend to give honest critique and hope to help you get better at writing. We need a little more activity and hope to get the authors in that are already in the library to join the site and help other authors with their intel, hence get less crap or even avoid the crap that seems to litter FF.net nowadays and help improve you as a writer.