Review for When Atlantis Sank

When Atlantis Sank

(#) Dunvi 2005-10-22 09:56:37 PM

The idea was a very unusual and yet obviously possible idea. A pat on the back to you. However, I think it could have been fleshed out more. The title didn't reflect upon the idea itself, and I think you could have expanded upon Harry's thoughts, and also written the Worlds' predicaments in a more moving and desperate way, becuase the way you put them sounds a bit like you're a text book, and you feel nothing for the affected innocents.

Overall, though, great story.
~Dunvi

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