Really like the story. Didn't like the fact that Daph's gotten taken advantage of but I can see why you did it. If her father put the clause in for Harry it would be very unlikely he would do any different next time....still I wish it could have been avoided, which it couldn't. (shrugs)
Like I said Really like the story hope you keep writing this and others! Oh and Cliffies are EVIL! :)
Author's response
- Yeah that was pretty much the point I was trying to make...