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This is going to be one heck of a long review, mind you. So you are warned.

First off--

"Now bruised perse and swollen frozen in a silent scream."

I loved this quote. So much. It was amazing.

Oh, and this one, too:

"The red heart that once read 'Brendon' in it, now blue and the words, unintelligible."

My two favorite quotes from this chapter. They were lovely and sick and incredible. I loved them. :]

Now, is it weird, that I say I felt more sad for Ryan than I did for Brendon? Even though Brendon was the one getting killed?

It was like, he was finally realizing the truth. That Brendon didn't really love him and that Ryan was actually nothing to him. And as much as I wanted Ryan to realize that in previous chapters, during this chapter, I still sort of wanted him to remain ingnorant, because I didn't want him to feel the pain of how hurtful the truth really was.

But, I also felt bad for Brendon. Having him find out that Ryan killed his love, must've been heartbreaking. But, it was heartbreaking for Ryan as well, to discover what Brendon really felt for Ryan.

And how Ryan just kept injuring Brendon was awful and saddening. This chapter was so intense and I truly applaud you. You have gone where no author has gone before. This story was original to the full extent.

I assure you I have never read anything like this.

It had love, betrayal, death, murder, lust, humor, revenge, rejection, insanity, and much, much more.

And I'm always a sucker for great endings. And at the end of this chapter, it was amazing. I can't describe it.

Update soon? (Will there be another chapter?)