An excellent story, one I am finding incredibly cool. Part of me wonders when and if harry will realize he could use the room to spy on death eaters...but that wouldn't be the point of this story, would it?
I absolutely loved the quidditch game, especially Angelina coming back because Dumbledore wanted her to convince Harry to finally end the Slytherin beat-down. I can't wait for the next part, and also can't wait to see if Harry eventually starts to date or have sex with some of the girls he's now watching.
Keep up the good work and get the next part out as soon as you can.
Author's response
Harry will eventually use the room to spy on certain Death Eaters, though not Voldemorte himself.