since this was an unoriginal writing i thought it deserved an unoriginal review.
some people who write stories should really give it up like they will write something so - unoriginal and have fucked up things like Gerard being married to a woman and having hot sex [which isn't all that great because of the writing] with one of the band members.
Anyway I totally get where you are coming from.
HERE is your unoriginal review: Awesome STORY!! Too bad it's a one shot.