Wow. That was sick. Sick, but awesome.
I'm just a little confused though- who was the voice with the x by it? Was that his crazy alterego?
And by the way, if you post any more stories, I will definitely read them. =)
Author's response
The x was some crazy little voice in te back of his head. It was kinda like hvaing the devil and angel on each shoulder, only thing there's no angel, and it's all in his head.