Review for 22 Acacia Avenue

22 Acacia Avenue

(#) MCR_dynamite 2008-06-24 09:22:42 AM

Aw, this was great. I love how you explained it all, like about Ray not being a violent person and everything. It helps readers understand the characters better.

I like how you're giving hints that Gerard "likes" Frank, but not actually just throwing it out there, it makes it more believable.

Anyway, I hope you update soon, I love this story.

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