Review for The Trial

The Trial

(#) Eewec 2008-06-26 11:30:42 AM

Almost last sentence:

[Quote]Harry Potter, you are charged with casting the Cruciatus Curse on Lucius Malfoy, a crime that carries with it a sentence of a lifetime imprisonment in Azkaban Prison. How do you plea?"
[/Quote]

Don't you mean Bellatrix there not Lucius. He's just been found not guilty of the one at Lucius. Also,. just before that, you're missing the 'd' off accused I think.

Author's response

Good job on catching the "d" in "accused" typo, I copied and pasted it four more times, and had to replace them all. Thanks!

As for the Bellatrix Lestrang/Lucius Malfoy issue, let's just say that yes, Amelia Bones meant to say "Belatrix Lestrange" and leave it at that.



-mo

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