Review for The Trial
The Trial
(#) Eewec 2008-06-26 11:30:42 AM
Almost last sentence:
[Quote]Harry Potter, you are charged with casting the Cruciatus Curse on Lucius Malfoy, a crime that carries with it a sentence of a lifetime imprisonment in Azkaban Prison. How do you plea?"
[/Quote]
Don't you mean Bellatrix there not Lucius. He's just been found not guilty of the one at Lucius. Also,. just before that, you're missing the 'd' off accused I think.
[Quote]Harry Potter, you are charged with casting the Cruciatus Curse on Lucius Malfoy, a crime that carries with it a sentence of a lifetime imprisonment in Azkaban Prison. How do you plea?"
[/Quote]
Don't you mean Bellatrix there not Lucius. He's just been found not guilty of the one at Lucius. Also,. just before that, you're missing the 'd' off accused I think.
Author's response
Good job on catching the "d" in "accused" typo, I copied and pasted it four more times, and had to replace them all. Thanks!
As for the Bellatrix Lestrang/Lucius Malfoy issue, let's just say that yes, Amelia Bones meant to say "Belatrix Lestrange" and leave it at that.
-mo
As for the Bellatrix Lestrang/Lucius Malfoy issue, let's just say that yes, Amelia Bones meant to say "Belatrix Lestrange" and leave it at that.
-mo
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