Review for Split Mirror
(#) Thelionwaits 2008-06-26 08:41:03 PM
You left the reader hanging, figuring there would be more, I hope you intend to pursue your story further, there is a lot of potential.
My only criticism - there are a few grammatical errors (minor punctuation and word usage, nothing major) you might want to look into for your future endeavors. Otherwise a very interesting read.
A brief look into Axl and Slash's thoughts and feelings on a bad morning for Axl.
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