Review for A Twisted Timeline

A Twisted Timeline

(#) Dragen 2008-07-01 01:53:44 AM

Great start mate, I do like how Harry greeted Voldy so cheerfully.

Harry took it well when he found out that he was sent to the past. I do like that Harry could do wandless magic. I do like how Harry handled his uncle and aunt.

I like what happened with the Goblin and how Harry got the blueprints for Azkaban, Hogwarts and Ministry of Magic.

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