Hey cool story! I also saw your a/n at the beginning of this chapter. The part about you dont think your ripping off anybody's ideal...I dont really understand what the big hoopla is about taking someone's ideal and then going in a different direction, as long as your story doesnt sound just like there or go bascially the same direction then whats wrong with it. I personally have seen and used others peoples ideals for my stories, I just took their ideal and made up my own story going in my own direction different from theres. Anyway what's the big hoopla about, face it were all guilty of using other peoples ideals, the main example is were all using rowlings ideal of and on Harry Potter stories!