Review for You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) medicatedlives 2008-07-19 11:37:50 PM
I saw it coming, I really did. Do you know how many times I had to scroll up the page because my eyes kept wandering south to find out who Elle's 'boyfriend' could have been?
And the cookie thing! Genius! You've done an amazing job at making Brendon look like a complete asshole, and that's a compliment because he's just oh-so-adorable.
AND Ryan finally admitted it to Helen. That must have done wonders for his conscience for that spit second when he thought everything was fine. Poor poor Helen. -tear-
I really hope they both end up miserable. They're perfect together! :]
Excellent chapter, truly. I can't wait for the next one!
I'm glad you enjoyed the cookie flashback. It really does pain me to write asshole Brendon, so I had to have something that made Brendon seem a little good [and adorable]
Oh yes, poor Helen indeed. I wish to give her a hug. :'[
I'm happy to hear that you liked the chapter. I was fearing that people would hate it.
Thank you for the review! :]
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