Review for Fly

Fly

(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-08-11 02:46:40 PM

Its pretty good! Now to read the sequal. Runs off

*Gummy Bears take keyboard*

Muhahaha you did not know about us now did you?

We like the detail that you have but think you could have just a but more detail. Like what did Clark feel when he found out he was flying? How fast were they going higher and what clothes was Alison wearing? But all in all it was pretty good!

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