Review for Son of the Serpents

Son of the Serpents

(#) ALConfederate 2008-07-26

Naah, you haven't failed as a writer. I see two groups working at cross-purposes getting in each other's way. Now if they DO ever start working together things will get messy.

But can't you just see a scene like, "I am Lord Voldemort! Bow before me!"

"I am Victor von Doom -- I bow to no one!" FRRZAAAAP!

Doing good, keep it up, and write faster! :)

Author's response

Thanks for reviewing!

Wait 'till next chapter! You'll get your Doom fix.