I was looking through the new stories page and saw yours. It left me cold. Here we are a week later and this time I decide to have a look see.
I'm glad I did. The title I didn't like and couldn't make any sense out of turns out to be perfect.
I always have liked Hermione. Though I like Ginny, Luna, well, all the girls I guess.
One of my favorite stories is by HiBob, "Plantagenet". This has that flavor too.