Review for Seventh Son
Seventh Son
(#) Clerith 2008-07-31 12:48:58 PM
PLOTHOLE: -aside from the fact that you have a way to measure magic power and that HP married Granger-
Over 100 Potters in Hogwarts currently?!
Magically powerful Granger?!
Eh, it was slightly awkward, with super!protagonist off the bat already. And no, super!nemesis just doesn't cut it -.-
We all want the main char to go evil! Dark Lord Potter
Over 100 Potters in Hogwarts currently?!
Magically powerful Granger?!
Eh, it was slightly awkward, with super!protagonist off the bat already. And no, super!nemesis just doesn't cut it -.-
We all want the main char to go evil! Dark Lord Potter
Author's response
Before I even start the story I state that it is a sequel to Innocence Faded.
as for the power scale, I envisioned it with average being in the mid seventies, and 80 being slightly above average for a fully mature witch or wizard.
As for the superpowered protagonist, He's not particularly smart, and his nemesis (perhaps nemeses, I haven't decided on that yet) will be much more intelligent and cunning, an almost as powerful.
Though I think you were just being nice when you called it just 'slightly awkward.'
If you are a fan of Ginny, you may want to turn back now, as at best she won't even be involved.
as for the power scale, I envisioned it with average being in the mid seventies, and 80 being slightly above average for a fully mature witch or wizard.
As for the superpowered protagonist, He's not particularly smart, and his nemesis (perhaps nemeses, I haven't decided on that yet) will be much more intelligent and cunning, an almost as powerful.
Though I think you were just being nice when you called it just 'slightly awkward.'
If you are a fan of Ginny, you may want to turn back now, as at best she won't even be involved.
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