Fairly decent start. I do look foreword to reading the next chapter.
However, I would like to point out that this fic does have one of my largest pet peeves involved.
That being Harry angsting about how he wants someone to like him for him and not being the boy who lived. The problem with this is that Harry has never, not even once, in cannon, made an effort to get to know anyone besides Ron and Hermione.
That being the case how in the name of God can any girl get to "know" the real Harry if he doesn't let anyone in to see that Harry?
Please for the love of god explain to me how he can expect someone to want the real Harry when he has never given anyone a chance too?
At any rate, sorry for the rant. And besides that one point the fic is very good.