excellent story but why the hell would you post something with all the sentences and paragraphs so damn close together...I personally would be to embarrassed to do something that stupid!
Author's response
I've posted on several different sites before now, and none of them had that problem. So, logic dictates that it's because of Ficwad.
And please, keep comments calling someone rampantly stupid to yourself. There's no point in telling me that, since I'll just ignore you.