Review for You Stole My Breath

You Stole My Breath

(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-08-06

What's this?
Is it...
No, it can't be!


BUT IT IS!

OMG, IT'S AN UPDATE!
-gasp-

NO WAY.

-dances in a frilly dress in complete excitement-

A few days ago, I was wondering where this story had gone and I began to fear that you had abandon it. But, alas! You have not! For this, I am truly happy!

[Despite the fact that I'm acting like an overly-obsessed fangirl over this story, I actually am excited that you updated.]

So, enough of this pointless rant, I think I'll give you a nice review now. :]

Firstly, I adore Regina's character so much. And it's not just that you make your characters so real, it's the personalities behind them as well. She's fun, bubbly, and I would love to have her as a friend.

Oh, and Logan? SUPA hot. XD
Even though this police officer has a rockin' body, I agree with medicatedlives. Jon is a kajillion times amazinger! [Amazinger? A word? No, I don't think so. But, hey, if Shakespeare can create words, so can I!]

I really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY hope that she goes on tour with Regina and Panic! [I know, I know, they got rid of the exclaimation point, but I still use it because I loved that thing. So sue me.] :]

Other than your fantastico characters, I have to say something about how beautifully you write.

Your words strike me in awe. They flow together flawlessly and I am jealous of your skillz. But, you are probably already aware of your marvelous writing ability, so I guess I'll just stop there.

Unless, you are like me, who is insecure over like, everything. If you are, please don't be. Your writing is so descriptive and lovely. ACK! Why can't I think of the words to tell you how amazing these chapters truly are? You leave me speechless!

Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens if Cassia DOES attend tour with her best friend, because Jon will be there and everything will be like, "WHOA"

So, I am very excited to see what happens next.

Well, I gotta go.

UPDATE SOON!

:]

Author's response

I think I was just as shocked about finally posting this chapter as you were. I only wish I had a frilly dress to dance in. haha. I'm glad that even with my absence everyone is still around to read this story. I really like where it's heading and I have some really great stuff planned.

I think my characters, if not just Regina's, seem so real because I've taken their mannerisms or sort of things they say from people I know. Regina is definitely like a lot of my friends put together into one person.

As for Logan, I wouldn't worry about him too much. You'll see what I mean in the next chapter.

Once again, I don't think I can thank you enough for all of the compliments that you give in your replies. Honestly, apart from sharing my stories on sites like this I don't let anyone read the things I write because I'm afraid to hear what they'll think. Most of the time I like what I write but I'm afraid someone is going to tell me isn't not as great as I had hoped. I dunno, I'm super paranoid about that kind of thing. So basically, thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you. Response like yours and the others that I receive are definitely what keep me writing!

New update VERY soon.