Review for Alive and Loved
(#) gekiranger 2008-08-08 04:20:46 AM
I liked the ending, though I felt that Seishirou's dialogue was a little forced. That was probably the one bit of the fic I feel could have been better, perhaps a little more enigmatic and less plain (as it seems like something Subaru would say, rather than Seishirou). Other than that, it was fantastic ^^
Seishirou's dialogue didn't satisfy me either but in this instance he wanted to push Subaru and later he was lying alone and talking to himself. I figure people are more honest when they know they can't be heard.
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