Oh boy, if that ending wasn't a cliffie there, I've got to say, if Severus or Albus actually ended up either attacking Min with a physical spell or a memory charm, and it seems likely as Snape was too calm for all that she said, then the two of them will have a special part of the lake reserved for them. I liked how things went with Remus, and you hit a feature I never liked about the Marauders, and the twins, no common sensnse when it came to a prank, and always taking it too far. Like how Luna went along and got to spend a moment with Hermione and her mum, and will be wondering if Hermione is the main person she is going to speak with, and will there be new dating trio the rest of the summer vacation?
Author's response
Thanks for taking he time for another review.
One of the things I'm aiming for with this fic, is to try and have my characters a little more real life than I usually read in fics.
By that I mean they aren't always right or wrong, good or bad. Sometimes they stuff up, and sometimes they really don't, but others think they do. Case in point was Remus' last quip. It was all in good fun, and should have generated a laugh amongst everyone, but Harry is just too messed up to take the joke. Still, in the last couple of weeks, he's been in a life and death battle, watched his friends injured, learned he's got the fate of the world on his shoulders, etc, etc. so I don't see how he can be anything else but a wreck on the edge at this point in time. Still, things should be getting better for him soon.
As for Min, the good news is I'm already 3k into the next chapter. Shouldn't be as long for the next update.
Cheers,
Brian