Review for No Bargain

No Bargain

(#) kira_k 2008-08-18 11:31:25 AM

I really liked the flow of the text, how their characters came through, how Asami still cared (despite being a bastard) and how Akihito reacted (not exactly knowing how much he could burn himself).

However, the story felt unfinished. It felt unfair to stop after the hair ruffling, as I (the reader) didn't get to know Akihito's reaction. Did he resist or did he comply? I couldn't decide- Akihito could go both ways and I wanted to know which way he chose.

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