Review for You Stole My Breath

You Stole My Breath

(#) Life_is_42 2008-08-22

well i loved how the chapter ended on a high note/positive hint there . =D

and i LOVED...nay ADORED the reintroduction of Jon into the story!!!!!
and my heart cried a little bit to see Jon sitting there dejected (or...rather READ jon sitting there dejected). very moving!
JON WALKER IS AMAZING, especially in this story :)

i like how you hinted that he'd handle One Night stands well. i thought that was a nice little detail.

oh goodness. ican't wait to see what happens next! (how greedy of me! just got a fantastic update, and yet i want more! XD you're just that good of a writer!)

Author's response

I'm glad you like Jon in this story. I try very hard to do his amazing-ness justice. Because he is indeed quite amazing. I hope I won't make your heart cry in the next chapter. You'll have to let me know if I do.

As for Jon's handling of one night stands, I guess that was just my way of reminding everyone that I love him...haha. I feel bad writing something that made him look like a jerk. I'm glad it jumped out to you.

Thank you for all your kind words. I'll try not to make you guys wait so long for the next update.