Review for Untold Paradox

Untold Paradox

(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-23

Hi there Dondon,

I thought they were going to come to their rescue and save them. That was a great cliffhanger.

I almost felt bad for Cassie, but you don't solve your problems like that. Poor Frank saw a very ugly side of Jamia does it effect their relationship if they make it out alive?

Have a great holiday and I'll be looking forward to an update when you get back (or sooner).

Author's response

Hey Moonshyne,

I know, Jamia is ashamed of that part of her past and didnt want Frank to know. Trust Cassie to spoil it all.

Im not sure what to do with Frank and Jamia's relationship yet, if they are alive that is.

Looking forward to hearing what you think of the new chapters I will post soon :)