WOOT!
JON IS IN THE HIZZ-HOUSE.
Oh gawd. I am so incredibly lame.
Annnnnd, the perspective change is fine. I actually like it a little better. It gives off the thoughts and feelings of all the characters, instead of just one. :D
I like your details. They are just so vivid. The diner, the car ride, all of it, was just awesome.
Awhe, poor Jon, feeling rejected and left out. That made me a little sad.
YAY FOR AMAZING CHAPTERS! I loved it. No lie. :D
Update soon!
Author's response
Not lame at all. It actually made me smile quite a bit. I like the new perspective quite a bit too. This chapter and the one I'm just about to post were hard for me, just because everyone had so many emtions going on at once. Besides, this opens up the option to write scenes that Cassia isn't present for, if I need to of course.
Thank you again for your kind words. Encouragements like this definitely keep me motivated with this story. I know usually I've gotten bored by this point in a story and just move on. Like that one FOB story I keep meaning to go back to. haha. Anyway, with such great readers, and characters, and ideas, i don't think i'll be abandoning this story anytime soon!
And don't worry, Jon won't be feeling so left out in the next chapter. Things are finally starting to fall together for this story. :D