Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) moonpig 2008-08-27

WELCOME BACK NEVE.

I loved your update especially Ruth reacting to Gerard at the door - priceless.

Your story makes me laugh so much and i absolutely love it. I truly believe in the way you write Bob.

Author's response

Thank you so much Moonpig, i can't help the funny stuff and i'm so pleased you guys get it.

I love writing Ruth, she's so in your face. I know i'm taking total liberties in terms of Jill's interaction with them but hey it's my story so i get to make it up.