Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) Moonshyne 2008-08-27

Welcome Back!!!

I was so excited to see the update!!

I loved it!!

I agree the whole intercom thing was hysterical.

And Bob was so kind and loving. I can't wait for the tour to begin.

Author's response

Hi Moonshyne, thanks for reviewing and i'm glad you are still enjoying the story.

I'm so pleased you like the interaction between Jill and Bob. I think Bob would be very much a private kind of guy. Jill is very much laughing everything off at the moment.

Oh but the tour - now that will be interesting and well Frank just can't help himself meddling.