Oh. My. God. This prologue made my heart rush! PLEASE continue. I didn't see anything too problematic, I think it'd be better if you had made the lawyer's voice in bold and Kaoru's regular so he could seem more booming and Kaoru would seem smaller compared to him. But other then that, I love it. I'm kind of wondering who's accusing Hikaru, because Kaoru apparently doesn't want him to be put away...
Please update soon!