I’ve been a huge fan of Harry/Bellatrix stories for a while now, either as a couple or whatever else. This chapter is original, well written and entertaining with many questions left to be answered. And you did all this in the first chapter; something many good and popular Fan Fiction authors aren’t able to do until at least a few more chapters, if at all. I can’t wait to read the second chapter, and I hope it will contain all the same qualities as this one.
I hope I'll be up t your expectations :) Thanks for the nice review :)