intriguing story so far! I eagerly anticipate reading the sequel. I like that the characters are all flawed in some way, and quite human. I do hope you keep at least Harry straight. I don't mind some slash in supporting stories, but for some reason Harry/slash always seems to squick me. Dunno why. I don't know why I am even asking that, but something about how you wrote one of the scenes with Draco suggested growing attraction as more-than friends... Anyway, hope I haven't offended you.
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with us.
-Telmah