Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness
To Fight the Coming Darkness
(#) maddsloth 2008-09-07 06:31:41 PM
This is a review for chapter 8, would not let me do it there, so here it is.
Still proving to be a good story, glad you did have Harry put Molly in her place a bit (and hope to see more of that) the bit about Draco was cool, and the Narcissa bit was cool and unexpected. Like the bit about “Harry we only manipulated you for your own good. Hell you were going to get sex either way so what is the big deal? Your warring to much about the fact that your friends and mentors are continuing to keep huge details about your life from you when you should be looking forward to the sex, by the way has anyone bothered to give you ‘the talk’ yet?”
Still proving to be a good story, glad you did have Harry put Molly in her place a bit (and hope to see more of that) the bit about Draco was cool, and the Narcissa bit was cool and unexpected. Like the bit about “Harry we only manipulated you for your own good. Hell you were going to get sex either way so what is the big deal? Your warring to much about the fact that your friends and mentors are continuing to keep huge details about your life from you when you should be looking forward to the sex, by the way has anyone bothered to give you ‘the talk’ yet?”
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