I sort of enjoyed this story, I read the entire thing hoping for more of a plotline that didn't develop. I would have liked to see Harry deal with the horcruxes in some fashion or another. I also felt that the enslavement became a bit much after about the third one. However it was well written for the most part and as they say free advice is worth what you paid for it. I hope others at least read a few chapters before judging it.