(#) Vanir 2008-09-21
Very nice, and as the story is too intriguing to be dragging at all, feel free to write longer chapters. :)
I would enjoy a quick glimpse of Britain, just to see the anthill kicked up. The Leader-thing is natural i suppose as I've seen it happen in real life, but I'm a bit surprised of how easily he trusted them enough to key them in to his room. As I see it, none of them has done anything to reciprocate. Why did he do it?
Vanir