Are you going to continue basically giving us the script from the movie? If so, I really wish I hadn't watched it again today, because it'll be fresh on my mind.
Looking forward to more Harry and River interaction; it's much more interesting than the script.
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I'm afraid I stick to the original script for a bit longer, then start to diverge around, oh... chapter six. If you want to read ahead, the address in my bio is to my ff.net account, where I have up to chapter eight posted.
I have a tendency to start out very close to canon and then slowly diverge into something barely related. Sorry if it's going a bit too slow for you.