Great update, i'm really enjoying this story.
I loved the banter once again, i really like the way you write Frank and how he interacts with everyone.
Poor Gerard, the side story here is so intriguing. So good how you had Mikey being there for his brother.
Hold a minute, i wasn't expecting the change with Bob and Jill (don't want to give anything away for those that haven't read it) Loved it especially Bob having to disappear to the bath room - ha ha
Author's response
Cheers moonpig, i'm so pleased you liked the update. It was really hard to write because i find it difficult writing about girlfriends etc without feeling guilty. I have Eliza as a bit of a bitch in this story but i'm sure she's a really nice person in real life. It's not based on her but my character just happens to have her name. Nobody sue me please.