Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) Dondon1827 2008-09-27

Brilliant update as always :)

This story has so much going on, Gerard's side of the story, Jill and Bob and I have the feeling there is something going on with Frank, not quite sure yet though.

Loved it, especially Bob's embarrasing little encounter down below lol.

Cant wait for an update =)

Dondon x

Author's response

Thank you for taking the time to review.

I do have storyline in mind for this but i get lots of additional things that just pop in and i can't help writing about the other guys.

I'm so pleased you liked Bob's unfortunate mishap - he he i'm so cruel. I'm not confident writing that stuff at all so i'm glad you knew what i was talking about.