Wonderful, as always.
I like how you're keeping this somewhat chaste here- while you can see there's a potentially great relationship between Jill and Bob, it's not all-out smut. So kudos for having enough taste to avoid that.
I noticed you didn't mention what Ray got- I'm guessing it might be because you don't know what he would like, seeing how you try to keep the characters as close to their real counterparts as possible. So, if my theory is correct, Ray listens to The Killers, Muse... and that's all I can remember from a Fuse interview I saw on YouTube.
Nods
Author's response
Hi Julianne
Thanks for taking the time to review. Also thanks for the tips with Ray's fav music, i will definately remember for the future.
I couldn't write smut if i tried (i'd have everyone laughing at my poor attempt) so i know people might think this lacks something but like you said others might prefer it this way. Not to say it will be dull because i promise you it won't be.
Thanks for being so kind and i'm so pleased you are enjoying it :)