Hi there Dondon,
It was nice to see a touching moment between Charli and Jade.
As far as a domination between Rick and Jade I think I see Jade as the dominant one but barely. I see them both into each other.
Just my opinion.
Author's response
Hey, I thought I should have at least one nice moment between them, and explain why Jade is the way she is.
That's totally fine if you think that, your opinion as the reader is what matters to this story.
Thanks for taking the time to review and give me some ideas :)
dondon xo.