Review for Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting
Harry Potter and the Chance Meeting
(#) Cateagle 2008-10-11 09:32:51 PM
/"So, you and George huh? I'd have bet on Angela."
"We flipped a coin." Alicia shrugged. "I lost."/
My compliments, that's a classic one-liner. 'Twas a thoroughly delightful chapter throughout. I loved the reaction at the Greenglass home when Daphne dropped her little bombshell, the fallout from that should be "colorful". The little bits you're dropping as to how the war with Tom ended are quite intriguing and I hope you continue to flesh that out. All in all, a very solid and entertaining chapter.
"We flipped a coin." Alicia shrugged. "I lost."/
My compliments, that's a classic one-liner. 'Twas a thoroughly delightful chapter throughout. I loved the reaction at the Greenglass home when Daphne dropped her little bombshell, the fallout from that should be "colorful". The little bits you're dropping as to how the war with Tom ended are quite intriguing and I hope you continue to flesh that out. All in all, a very solid and entertaining chapter.
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