WOw. Your amazing.
You should work with the CSI team (on T.V (you could write the script))
:D
Great Chapter.
Finally they might be cleared.
And isn't the 3rd gunshot the guy who killed himself.
Ahah.Im so good at this dances
I really hope im right otherwise im gonna look really stupid. xD
Update Soon Please
Ello
Xxx
Author's response
Hi there Eloise,
Thank you so much for the compliment.
I wuv you!!
They may be cleared they may not be cleared.
Mark was shot three times, sorry.
You still are good though.
You'll never look stupid.
I don't when I'll get a chance to update maybe by Thursday or Friday.
Thanks for the review!!