A good ending with threads tied up nicely (I do feel sorry for Hermione & Justin but that does happen) with a nice touch of humor in the final scene. I do love that they never tell Albus and I figure they, of all people, have the right to "desecrate" his grave. Your scenes with Ginny and Tonks were quite poignant and the reader does feel for them (Ginny's an especially sad case, IMHO). I think the final resolution for Tom was so appropriate and I doubt it's something that Albus ever would've guessed as I doubt he'd have the data to work from, or had forgotten it as "insignificant" since it was pre-Hogwarts for Harry.
All in all, it's been a brilliant story. Cheers.
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