(#) lycus 2008-10-30
That was a good chapter, And I like how you had Aetius keep Harry in good spirits, Especally when he is facing an intimadating teacher like Ciar. And seeing how the people in England are doing was great, Dumbledore will probably start searching for him ASAP, And Harry can avoid being doused by love potions( I don't care what Rowling wrote, she mentioned the potions and suddenly Harry is in love with Ginny. where he really is in love with Hermione). And again I hope that you avoid the Ron/Hermione non-scence. And even now Harry is showing that is isn't even an average Mage, How long will it take for other students or teachers to notice.