Review for As Of Yet, Untitled.
As Of Yet, Untitled.
(#) shysmile 2008-11-04 08:59:57 PM
have you ever seen the movie poltergeist? if not, there is a famous line in the movie that goes, "they're here". that is immediately what i think of when you post a new chapter. i know i'm strange.
so do you know how ridiculously happy it made me to see:
1) your new chapter
2) your responses to my review
and...
3) my shoutout at the end of the chapter!
i was excited. it made my day.
soooo... i was thinking that when you write a novel and become super famous that you should put me on the dedication page because i am "like the greatest reader ever. Period." just a thought.
now i think i'm actually going to get around to reviewing the chapter.
i think frank and egan are long lost siblings. they are freakishly alike.
the title of this is a-ma-zing.
i think donna is described perfectly.
frank's crush story was hysterical.
you cannot just end the chapter like that! it isn't fair!
p.s. of course i still read.
so do you know how ridiculously happy it made me to see:
1) your new chapter
2) your responses to my review
and...
3) my shoutout at the end of the chapter!
i was excited. it made my day.
soooo... i was thinking that when you write a novel and become super famous that you should put me on the dedication page because i am "like the greatest reader ever. Period." just a thought.
now i think i'm actually going to get around to reviewing the chapter.
i think frank and egan are long lost siblings. they are freakishly alike.
the title of this is a-ma-zing.
i think donna is described perfectly.
frank's crush story was hysterical.
you cannot just end the chapter like that! it isn't fair!
p.s. of course i still read.
Author's response
Yes I have seen Poltergeist! I watched it on Halloween!
I'm so glad you were happy to see
1.) My new chapter
2.) My response to your review
3.) My shout out to you!
I'm glad I made your day :D
And if I ever get published, I will dedicate the book to "like the greatest reader ever. Period." TRUE STORY.
Frank and Egan brighten my dark days when I have four quizzes and a lot of homework. I love their dynamics; I don't so much write them anymore as they write themselves. They're where I get to have my most sarcastic, snarky, obscene fun.
So you got the title then? It was Biblical, so I wasn't sure of the reponse/recognition I would get.
Thanks! I never see Donna in the news, I think I've only ever seen her once, if at all, so I had to wing it when it came to her. I was hoping I kind of got it right.
Ahaha, Frank and his little angsty teen moments. There may be more to come if need be.
I HAD to end it there! That was the perfect ending! But I'm working some more on the new chapter, so, patience is the key here, dear.
And good. I thought perhaps you had left the story and my little wayward self behind.
The End
I'm so glad you were happy to see
1.) My new chapter
2.) My response to your review
3.) My shout out to you!
I'm glad I made your day :D
And if I ever get published, I will dedicate the book to "like the greatest reader ever. Period." TRUE STORY.
Frank and Egan brighten my dark days when I have four quizzes and a lot of homework. I love their dynamics; I don't so much write them anymore as they write themselves. They're where I get to have my most sarcastic, snarky, obscene fun.
So you got the title then? It was Biblical, so I wasn't sure of the reponse/recognition I would get.
Thanks! I never see Donna in the news, I think I've only ever seen her once, if at all, so I had to wing it when it came to her. I was hoping I kind of got it right.
Ahaha, Frank and his little angsty teen moments. There may be more to come if need be.
I HAD to end it there! That was the perfect ending! But I'm working some more on the new chapter, so, patience is the key here, dear.
And good. I thought perhaps you had left the story and my little wayward self behind.
The End
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