Review for Stray

Stray

(#) Pillsy 2006-08-18

Good story. Original, but with a few grammar and spelling errors. I would gladly like to offer you my services as beta-reader, please contact me with your response.

As to which house Stray should be placed in, I would have to say that Slytherin would be too predictable with the demonic properties he posesses. I agree with your friend in that he seems more of a Hufflepuff than anything else.

Pillsy