I won't critique the formatting of the story, I know how much of a pain Ficwad is in posting a story.
I like it, the voice speaking to Harry is intriguing and a bit worrisome.. there is a point at which you have to ask if you trust that voice or not.
the retraining of Kreacher and also Dobby, they are the opposite ends of the spectrum and you may have found a way to bring them into something like normalcy. clever.
I am always watching for a good story, this one strikes me as having a lot of potential.
my personal preferences..no slash, no R/HR..Ron is useless and does not deserve someone like Hermione, EVER.. even if she isn't with Harry.. well, you know.
it is also pathetic that I feel the need to post this factoid..
TimW